hi victoria, first of all id like to thank you for always giving me honest feedback and always a constructive criticism to help me make my designs better, it has really helped me! now for your design - i like the simplicity of the design, the bookshelf, the marble countertops and the overall layout. I do think though that it is too white, maybe by adding a colour or making a feature wall would make it more interesting. well done and good luck. please see mine.